All Comments on 'Caught'

If they want a high score, they will post in fetish, which is where this belongs. As a fetish story I would give this a 4. As a lw I gave it a 1.

There is nobody, except nameless husband one, to like in this story, nobody! Well done! Every person in there could be put into the compost pile and the world would be better.

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I must say the story was well written with a tight plot line and a disciplined style that enhanced the drama and the provocative punch. Hated the gay aspect, as it seemed to only be there to provoke. Also one other small problem, the last line had no real relationship with the rest of the story. Cheap ploy for cheap drama...a pseudo dramatic non sequitur. Maybe I am wrong about the end of this story, though, if the hubby is also fucking his daughter, then I sorta understand, makes the human cesspool stink more wonderfully. The story needed a further sentence to explain this. In general, a very good story. Thank you for entertaining me Juderboy.

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Stupid story indeed. Reading all the rest I believe you get a turn on writing this trash.