All Comments on 'Caught by the Tide Ch. 04'

I really do. You're becoming one of my favourite writers- definitely one of the best on this site. Thanks for sharing your talent with us. Hope to read more of Rebecca's adventure soon!

Love this story tons, can't wait for more soon!!

Your writing is richly evocative -- I am completely caught up in what's going to happen to Becks and Luke next! Here's hoping the next installment comes along really, really soon!

I got so excited to see another one of your chapters finally posted. I love this story and can't wait to read the next one.

Can't wait for next chapter.

Loved it ... You left us in nowhere with this end : ))) pls posst more soon : )

I hope that the next chapter comes quickly!

More!

Thank you Lily, and here's to the next one - when you've finished honing it to brilliance!

Roger

I just got caught up on this story a couple weeks back and didn't notice this chapter had posted. I had to go back and skim through the previous chapters. A very good story, lots of twists and I am looking forward to reading the next chapter (which posted today). Excellent work.

you brought the bastured into the picture, I know more to come but bringing into this segment is really "F'd" up.

So wrapped up in this story that I can't sleep until I catch up. If only there were a few Lukes in this world. Wait, maybe there are a few.....

So glad to see your posting again. Can\\\'t wait to read more.

So rapped up in this story, that I can't get myself to sleep... and I HAVE to! Just like another reader commented: "if only there were a few real Lukes..." Keep up!

Thanks for the lovely story.

Daniel needs to get his tall bastard ass outta there...go Luke!

Lol, had to be crude! :D

I can safely say you've done an amazing job.

I'd like a Luke for real please!

Uh oh. Now Daniel is back in the picture. I can tell there is going to be another emotional chapter coming up--as if I didn't enjoy the previous ones immensely. evanslily, I think you are one of the best writers on this site. Your characters are alive. I can see them and feel their breath, they are so close, as you describe them. Your writing is truly a gift.

That "making love" scene was just..oh my...I don't have words...delicious like a bottle of water after thirsting for days in a desert. I just found you yesterday and have been reading since. Phenomonal job and please keep it up.

This is TOO FUNNY. Just finished reading "back to the farm" and though it couldn't be beat, but this has humour, wit and is SEXY.

Love it, Lily.

--Dixie

great story!

I wish I could have given it a 6 or higher

Where are these men you write? I need to go there:)

This is one of the best stories I've read on this site. Excellent job! And if you know where we can find men like Luke please let us know soon!!!

A major reason why I read stories on this site is to learn to be like the suave nonchalant cassanova's and this story exemplifies this pursuit.

Love the ending!

It's getting interesting more and more ..... something is hidden in Writer too.

I believed writer's nature and character can be figured out by his/her writing and I am amazed by this discovery.

I've read this story like 8 times since it was published here and it always makes me smile. This is my second favorite chapter and its fantastic. Great writing, interesting characters, and a whole lot of plot to look forward to.

.. and great now to 'meet' Daniel who I suspect is about to get his come-uppance.

I'm glad I discovered your stories, they are amazing

I am so glad i just discovered this and dont have to wait for the next chapters! You're my favorite author here!!! Thanks so much!!! 😘

good writing, im a along for the ride, becks has the right mix of being hysterical/heartbroken without being wimpy

Last chapter "I'd been so proud of myself for not shedding a single tear"

This chapter: the convo with mom tales of sightseeing, doesn't need to know face is constantly blotchy from crying

After the horrible day i have had, getting lost in this story has been great. Your writing is so vivid. I cant wait to read more! Thank you for sharing your talent!

Well Luke's an arrogant, controlling little prick isn't he? I'd have kicked him in the hands myself, but each to their own I guess.

Your protagonist is over the top dramatic - and I LOVE her! Awesome funny stuff - thank you for sharing !

thankfully there is a next part. really need the confrontation with Daniel and story behind Luke. All the extended sex is sort of distracting.

Never ceases to amaze me how you continue to surprise and entertain me (reader). A show stopper.

Were you always like this?

As a lover, you would never be humdrum boring, eh?

No seven year itch, no midlife crises. Oh my!

I agree with other comments about Luke being controlling - particularly in bed, making her beg for what she wants. I've never liked that kind of story or action. Maybe after the relationship is solid and it's done in a playful, teasing manner. But only after you've developed months and years of trust and love, not in the first real time they've been together. That was definately a turn-off for me.