All Comments on 'Caught in the Act'

I got confused towards the end because at the beginning one of his daughters was named clare and then it was saying Sara was his daughter

oh shit.....time for the next story.

Looking forward to chapter two.

Not great , but it was good . You must work on proofreading . Part 2 should be good .

I liked the story. It should have been a little longer. Although you have left yourself plently of wiggle room for new submissions.