All Comments on 'Caught in the Act'

Make me hard reading that story - you sure have a way with words. Nice that you have a grasp of spelling and grammar, too! lol.

Now I'm horny and the wife is not due home for another hour. Very good, as in hot, story. You have an erotic imagination and technical skills. Normally, I cringe at the grammar errors or clumsy structures but I don't recall any in this story.

Wow super hot, more and more of this please and soon with cunnilingus.

Cunt lapping sex maniac, UK

Wonderful, wonderful story. Just proves that women can write about sex so much better than us guys!

I was caught once, but the girl ran off in horror. Not surprising really, we were both only fifteen!

Please write some more

Tom, London

First story of yours I have read (I like tales about people getting caught doing things) and it won't be the last. I loved the inter-play between the characters, your writing style was great, but being nit-picky, I found it a little over-descriptive during their final act. For me, it slowed it down and some of it didn't work. E.g. "He took it deeper, drawing it out with slow sweeps of his tongue, soft nibbles of his lips." (describing a kiss). Still, a 5 star effort in my book for the superior build-up, characters & in general, terrific word-play.

We've missed your delicious tales of lust and romance __Lisa__ Welcome back lovely lady!!!

wow, i need a cold shower now

Oh, my!

Great story!! I loved it, so did the hubs!! We can't wait to read more of your stories!!

Lovely to see the differences of a woman's true point of view

It was very subtle the way you described Anna from her own POV, blending low self esteem with just the right words to let the reader know the truth of her desirability. Well crafted!

Obviously your prose is superb (oh, and hot!), but I think my favourite thing is the way you handled the "transition". You took Anna from a self-conscious / 'I'm embarrassed to be with this man' state through the full journey of acceptance, arousal, lust and mutual fulfilment without a hitch in smooth, romantic, believeable steps. That journey is so much more interesting - and so much hotter - than the usual "Hey, we're both hot. Let's fuck" (or the "Hey, you're my sister, let's fuck") that is the staple of amatuer erotica.

Easy 5, thank you.

Belinda.

Perfect story... The writing, the length, the characters, the fucking...

My panties were soaked by the end!!! ;P

Couldn't help but let my fingers roam while reading & wishing my room mate would walk into my room & make this fantasy into my reality?! Lol

LOVE IT! ;)

You don't drain rice!

Obviously written by a women. Thank god!

Are Americans always behaving like that. If so, I will migrate....

1. In Australia we do drain rice.

2. The author is Australian, not American.

She loved the big Aussie cock.

They drain rice in America too. Irrelevant on such a hot read!!!

Lovely story---playful, sexy, fun. It's kind of a fairy tale, really---the gorgeous, out-of-my-league roommate (how did become roommates in the first place? Doesn't matter, it's a fairy tale.) ultimately finds me as desirable as I find them. The feelings come through delightfully. Very well done. Thanks.

Delicious for sure and I'm not taking drained rice.

It ended too soon 5*****

I love your writing sooo sexy. Thankyou

Your stories are presented in such an erotic yet romantic fashion. The sexual portions of the stories (I have read several of your works) are hot but the addition of feelings beyond only lust makes for exceptionally sexy reading. Perhaps the most arousing thing for me is having a woman express herself in a sexually stimulating situation and acknowledging her sexual desires including her masturbation fantasies and then fulfilling them. I just love it when women let their sexual selves and desires be revealed. Here’s to hoping that our social repression of women’s sexuality will VERY SOON become a thing of the past. Best wishes and keep writing such expressive erotica! Greg from PA

Oh my god is this story so hot. Extremely good plot,description and use of words.