All Comments on 'Caught in the Crossfire Ch. 01'

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bearslady over 9 years ago

Nice setup. I'm really hoping you restrain yourself from dropping over the edge into the typical over the top blackmail story. Curious to see where this goes

Anonymousover 9 years ago

I like this nasty guy!

Perfect writing, with a hot, dirty, Dom guy! As a subF, I can't wait for more!

Anonymousover 9 years ago

Sorry, but he's just as bad as those cops he think so lowly of. What an asshole.

verbicide over 7 years ago

Wow.

Jack's a real son of a bitch. Then again, if the Santos home is as palatial as described, the Mrs. has to know her husband is on the take, so she's no saint. I don't like anyone in the story so far, so...excellent start.

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