All Comments on 'Caught In The Rain Ch. 01'
by Lil_Lucy
- 15 Comments
Anonymousalmost 15 years agoI thought it was good! Just enough reluctance to make it believeable. Please continue.
Anonymousalmost 15 years agoPlease ignore the idiot who rated your work as a 00.....apparently he/she is one. The reluctance but desire is hot...........she IS a naughty girl though......
Anonymousalmost 15 years agoAnd don't listen to anyone who tells you what your story should or shouldn't be. It was well written, and it made me hot. That's all that matters
Anonymousalmost 15 years agoGet a life you haters!!! I liked the story. Please continue.
digdaddyrichalmost 15 years agoShe is submissive to her daddy and likes to be made to do what ever he wants her to do. I think a good spanking is due for her getting all wet and running a chance of getting sick. After all she isn't any good to him if she is sick. She is a little cum dump that should know who owns her silly ass. Fuck her until she goes cross eyed, then spank her little ass good. Thanks for the good story........Rich
2275jralmost 14 years agobrilliant story. reading this was like watching as daddy take what you want him to take you. awesome writing. can't wait to read more. if this first part is anything to go by. the next should be even better.
Anonymousalmost 13 years agoso hot!! can't wait to read the remaining chapters. i'm gonna have a big orgasm to this. i love your style!!
Anonymousabout 12 years agonot fond of this type of writing style, you started off badly when you wrote the he'd opened the door to see you, then writing again that he opened the door and let you in
The good that i find is that you have him controlling what she gets, there is a force behind it, but not that much, he isn't that sadistic or he'd never have run a bath for her, which is odd; Daddy Domish, but then it flips a bit when she swears at him which a girl would never be allowed to get away with, i'd like to see you continue, it's good, i think you can take it many directions
Scorpio44almost 12 years agoI"m looking forward to reading more of their adventures.
Anonymousalmost 10 years agoHope theres more to come......noticed that its been a while too....Great story so far cant wait till the rest of it comes out.
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