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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

George?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Who's George?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Not only does George suddenly appear - but what happened to the vicar?

egeswenderegeswenderalmost 3 years ago

Switches from first to third person. Seems to want to include tags without committing to any. However I liked the flavor of the story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Good story, thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

A great idea but needs editing and Some more details

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Story was all over the place, and in need of a lot of editing…!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Needs editing. Punctuation is odd in spots, and first person switches to third and back. There are lots of holes (and I’m not talking the main character’s!).

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

What about your marriage... did you just forget that?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

A bit of a rambling mess to be honest! Were you on speed when you put this together?

rabbit49679rabbit49679almost 3 years ago

Looking forward to a part 2

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Retired engineer, retired on the coast. My writing background has been technical writing. The works of writers like saddletramp1956 and kalimaxos inspired me to give it a try. I enjoy comments from published authors, in most cases the comments are helpful. Anonymous comments...