All Comments on 'Caught Red-Handed'

brilliant and very discripted you feel you are the fly on

the wall,more episodes of this story.just keep em cumming

A very good story. Please continue.

Love to see how it plays out!

Great story !! Keep it up! Let us know how it goes with them and if the older sister finds out or he approaches her about the photos on the net!! A very good way to start a series of stories.

a nice mix indeed!

I loved your story!

Well written, good story line, very romantic and erotic.

unrealistic you expect us to believe that after she embaresses and humiliates him that he would suddenly forget about it just because she starts crying no way he would roll over and tell her to get the hell out and never talk to him again keep it realistic and believable or put it in the fantacy area when writing fiction you can't alter human behavior your charicters have to act like real people would and people hold grudges and are spiteful

Nope. Didn't work for me. Very shallow piece o work.

You think a hymen is "half way in" ? And "pain instantaneous" ?

Do some homework. Also, develop a plotline.

Plainly awesome! Loved everything about it great story great detail! I've been throbbing hard all through. I wish all that could happen to me'!

A hymen is not "half-way inside" any woman's vaginal canal, why do you people persist in this idiotic idea? 99% of females lose their hymen (which is just behind the labia, across the entrance to the vagina, if they ever had one in the first place, that is) in very early childhood through running, exercising, swimming, any one of a 100 ways, and any girl who has an obstruction "half-way inside" her that bleeds when penetrated is in some serious gynaecological trouble. Check your facts, read a book, look it up, and quit perpetrating this ludicrous myth that all teenage girls have a hymen "half-way inside" them! And by the way, endlessly repeating their names is very, very annoying - John and Amy are the only ones in the bed havng their first fuck, do we really need to have them name-checked in every fucking sentence? John, John, John, John, Amy, Amy, Amy, Amy ad nauseam...

Poorly written and plotless wank story is about all this could be called, and not worth even one star.

I really enjoyed the story. (Stories of getting caught are a thrill.) It had nice pacing and sexy description. The characters were fairy nicely developed. Wonderful job.

very good such authors are preciious plz continue to write

OK, this was a teaser! Come on there is two other sister, their friends, and of course, Alyssa. What about mom?Looks like you can 4 or five more chapters, and the way you write tells me they will be as great as what you have done. Great writing and well edited.

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