All Comments on 'Caught Screwing Mom's Daughter'

Keep em comming :)

Gave it four stars, a nice story to tear one off to. Story seemed a little rushed, I mean just like that a mother is going to say "fuck it" and screw her daughter's boyfriend? Well, maybe in California lol. I didn't care much for the title, it seems to imply the two were brother and sister. But like I said it was entertaining and fairly hot

I hear you on the title. I struggled on what to call it and was not super satisfied with the result either.

Larry

Nice job my friend. Have to agree though maybe 'Caught Screwing Her Daughter' might have been better.

Mike

Well yes we do want to read more about these morally degerate individuals, and I want to know if this big cock will be in Momma's or Olivia's ass first. 5 stars

Oh fuck yes, my two girlfriends and I will act this out till we all pass out from

The insane level of sex pleasure, to start over as soon as we cu

round. I just adore squirting cunts and getting drunk on cunt nectar. More and

more please and soon. Cunt lapping sex maniac,Lanc's uk

Really enjoyed your story and looking forward to the continuation.

Expecting more enjoyable sexy situations in the furtherance of the story.

Olivia can learn quite a bit from her "experienced" mom. And poor Tim will just have to bear the burden of the continuation of their threesome encounters. Sine Sally stated she has had it in all holes, perhaps she needs to teach Olivia how to take Tim's big cock in her ass. Or perhaps Sally needs to show Olivia some strap on sex or perhaps Sally and Tim DP Olivia, or vice versa. So many ways these three could go. Keep it up.

Left my cock leaking precum!

Great story. Had me my fingers going at warp speed

The one major issue I have is how did the mom find out Olivia was in his apartment in particular much less then get in? She is upset her daughter MAY be out partying and fucking so she does what exactly? Goes cruising looking for god knows what sign that her kid is there and then gets into an apartment building only to then, I don't know, proceed to break into every one and search all the rooms till she finds her daughter? As if that isn't bad enough she then proceeds to verbally, physically and sexually assault the person who she finds in his own place of residence? I know this is only erotica and fantasy but please try to keep the premise and character interactions some what realistic.

To your question: (1) Tim forgot to lock his apartment door and (2) at the tail end of the story, Olivia finds out that mom has put a tracking app in her phone and that puts her in close vicinity to the apartment. Couple that with the kids screaming during sex and mom zeros in on the correct apartment.

Keep in mind that this is smut and most smut has holes in the plot that we have to overlook. I hopefully covered them reasonably well but agree that especially in the Incest/Taboo section writers often take literary license with things.

Thanks for reading and for your comments.

Understand that you thought you completed this story but it is soooo good that am sure many of us would like to follow your writing skills to get other mothers involved, etc.

With her unknown past and the opportunity at hand, Mom was so turned on she jumped at getting a nice young cock in her. That is okay and it was a fun read. I could see a whole lot of places where this story could go, or just let it lay there on its own as is. Olivia and Tim marry, move in with mom. He impregs both; incest family tree. Or they all go to a frat party and mom shows the young girls how its done. Wow, the imagination kind of runs off with a hot story like this.

ok..lets get back to writing more on mother and daughter...when mom visits the college..damm good work

Hot story! Love mother/daughter threesomes!

Loved it. Great story.

really enjoyed the very hot and erotic sex,,well written and well paced.

You go mama

That's fkn hot !!!

Great story should be more and to see how Oliver's mom went at the college parties .

I so enjoy these incest stories

Jacqui

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Good story. Mom needs to stay with Tim and her daughter and not screw any other guys, Tim needs to knock her up and later when he finishes college do the same to the daughter. Then all live together,