All Comments on 'Cause and Effect'

Needed better editing

Spill Cheque and what ever kind of editing was done let ewe down hear.

that so many fantasists have to write stories about girls/women with "massive tits"?

Thank God you're back.

You clicked a story with the tag 'Big tits'... I'm sorry you're not gonna find an A cup here. Go find a story about small tits if it's an issue. But we know what we like over here.

You can't even keep the characters straight, pronouns are all fucked, no continuity of who is in what position, yuck. Terrible story.

The easiest way to see new stories is, well, clicking or bookmarking the New Stories link. Tags DON'T appear on that page. The don't appear on the writer's page. The don't appear on the category page. I'm hard pressed to think of places where they do appear.

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Face it, unless you are searching via the tags, they are useless.