All Comments on 'Celestial Wars Ch. 03'

So much detail, I really enjoyed these stories and would love to see more

Noble_Truth, you said there would be more this year, but that was 2014 and still nothing. If you're not going to write more, don't tease... Loved the series so much, keep up the good work.

Took me a while to come back and finish reading this story....worth every second :)

I have to agree with other comments. Can we please be told what has become of Devnik and his delightful companions?

My heart breaks for her!! I wanted her to become an equal with Maria!! The three of them living together!! I looooved this story but I wanted so much more for her :(

I just re read the whole series and it's still unbelievably well written and captivating. I really love it. I do still hope you continue this story

Hi, same annon again, just re read this a third time and something stood out to me. I think what really drew me in to this novel was how genuine the story was. What I mean when I say that is that the story isn't something added in for the sex. It seems like the exact opposite; the sex seems to only exist to support and embellish the story and thickens the plot so very rightly while it's at it. Still just amazed at this story. You wouldn't mind if I printed a paper copy would you?

I'm a huge fan. Do you do patreon things?

Thank you for this story. I found myself involved with the characters, and even wondering what would happen to them as they worked their way through each of the stories twists and turns.

Now I find myself wondering what happens to them next as these characters obviously have quite a bit of life left in them... and eternity is quite a long time.

Still, I appreciate you sharing even this brief glimpse into their world.

This is such a beautiful story. Its shows how much research u would have done before writing it. No dull moment at all. U are really a great writer. I really wish there was mire. Buh i didnt like the fact that u made darkness overpower d light buh apart from that lovely story so far

I loved the storyline and I enjoyed reading your work. One thing I didn't especially like was when Cariel and Devnik somewhat became lovers. I had mixed feelings about who Devnik loved more. Cariel or Maria? In the end, it was Maria but I liked it when it was just her and Devnik. I enjoyed reading this though and it had a fantastic storyline.

I enjoyed the story, but if I'm honest I felt a bit cheated at the end. After making a big deal about the bond affecting Devnik and making him less evil, I was expecting him to cut a deal with Michael, betray the dark, and return to the light.

Perhaps paying off the effects of the bond on Devnik is being saved for the promised, but as yet unreleased, third installment.

I've just finished reading the whole series and have got to say, why not make a sequel to this? The 3 are becoming demons and there's still much more you can add to this incredible series (IMO). I would love to check out a sequel as would many others would, seeing that people are still reading it. Regardless this is probably the best series I've read on this website, bravo!

So the prince of destruction's idea of punishment is licking his ball sack for an hour? Does he hand out chocolate-covered Brussels sprouts on Halloween and kick puppies on weekends, maybe paint fake tunnels on cliffs to cause accidents?

What gets counted as evil in modern fiction is downright silly, it's sad you fell into that trap.

Why don't we get to see them turn into demons? I wanted to see them turn into demons!

0/10 :no demon transformations.

Also, this was pretty great. Good job.

Dude, this shit is too good. Best series on this website.

Thanks for sharing your mind with us

I read this series a few years ago and have just come back to reread it. It is absolutely brilliant. I have enjoyed it more than anything else on Literotica. Sad to see that you haven't posted any more stories! Please start writing again. Please!

This story was thought provoking and enticing. I would love to read more stories about these characters.

I would love to read this as a book in hand series. I'm rather surprised to find this gem here. Don't get me wrong I love Literotica but usually come for the smut, not swept up in a page turner. Harry Potter was a page turner ( as in cannot put it down til I'm done) and while there have been others Ken Follet's Pillars of the Earth and Brown's The Da Vinci Code are the only other well written captivating novels that rank up there in capturing my emotion, mind and time. I'm very curious as to whether the author plans to continue the saga or if perhaps has other works off site? Well done I truly enjoyed your work.

I live this story, thank you for sharing it with us. I hope you will write more if these characters.

Wow this is literally one of d best stories I have read here on literotica. Pls do well to write more stories and possibly write a saquel

Your story flows so smoothly. Please. Do write more. Preferably about Michael, what a fascinating character. You've captured the gentle and yet-warrior like nature of the arch-angel so perfectly.

10/10.

Your writing is second to none! Thank you!

I would love to read their final transformations! Not to mention I am insanely curious as to how he would punish Jon. If it were the girls it wouldn't be a question, but Jon....hmmm. I would love to read how the sisters relationship developed as well. Will Marie become like a queen demon? To many questions left unanswered lol. Please write more!

I enjoyed the premise of Heaven making mistakes. I wonder what Heavens response would be if Michael had perished? All out war again? 5 stars.

Lord Devnikolus, Prince of Distraction. lol

That was truly, including the very first book, the BEST thing I have read on Literotica. WOW.

In all the years I have been reading at this and other erotic literature sites, I have never given a story 5 stars... until now.

You are truly gifted when it comes to spinning a yarn and it was a pleasure to follow along on this journey of yours.

Thank you for sharing.

Honestly, I read this for the erotica at the beginning. Soon I was hooked on the story and the world you built. Would love to see more from you.

This series is book worthy.

This was great? Love Celestial Matters and all 3 chapters of Celestial Wars. But is there any more about Jon in hell to read? Something tells me that he has a few more adventurous in his future...

I have read Celestial Matter, and quicky read all three chapters of Celestial Wars. These stories are just amazing. Please make a third series/sequel.

This is addictive! ❤️

Thank you so much for this beautifully written,deeply enthralling piece of art. Wishing you many more happy years of writing

I loved your story. One of the "Magical" things about your writing is that you often create wonderful phrases. I see some commentators bitching about all of your mistakes - grammar, writing, etc. Well - you do have quite a few. But for me, they are more than balanced out by some of the wonderful sentences you have crafted - particular ways of stating things. I wish I could give you six stars. Thank you for sharing your work - I enjoyed it very much.

Great read! Flew through all it rather quickly and find myself wanting more. Read your bio, so I will lie in wait for anything else you might release. (Hopefully a continuation of Celestial Wars). Thanks for sharing!

incredible.

Love your work. Been waiting for the next one for years.

only one word....FANTASTIC!!!!!!!!!

Loved the story. Was confused for a long time over the two angels, Veriel and Vraiel…thought they were the same…a typo or something.

Not sure how I can be the only person here to think this is a ridiculous ending. I was hopeful the characters (esp. Devnik) would evolve with the acknowledgement that Devnik and Maria's love was a lie that was forced upon them. I guess I forgot this is in the mind control category which explains why Maria and Cariel are both written as mindless one dimensional wanton sluts who are happy to live a lie because that's what mind control is - suppressing free will. Ah well - teaches me to steer clear of this category in future.

WTF?! Randomly ran across this story and whilst beginning was interesting, it just became predictable - no character development. I felt you had so much potential - so disappointed! You'd be great at writing the co-ed gangbang stories on this site

wait, is this completed or is there going to be more chapter?

So fucking good! I wish there was more .

I bet you read the comments on these stories still from time to time. I want you to know that this is my all time favorite series on Lit. Hope you continue this - you’ve put so much effort into the world building to leave it unfinished like this

So does the awakening spell survive the transition from half angle/human to demon change? What happened to Jon?

So many questions!

First, loved your story. Second, Michael casts a rape torture spell on all aethlings and nobody ever brings this up! What the hell! If an aethling doesn't want to fuck their awakener they feel severe pain. I thought this would be a pretty major plot point of how wildly corrupt angels at all levels could be. How the angels were fundamentally disconnected from how humans thought and they only cared about order instead of goodness. I was expecting Alariel to throw it in Cariel's or Michael's face that they are just disappointed she wasn't raped by the right person. Still a good story, but it felt really weird that this never came up.

I ate this entire series up! Still wish Devnik and Maria were exclusive though. Love lots to the author xxx

I have to echo cinnamon_nymph, I liked this story. Well written, despaired typos, but I do wish Devnik had been exclusive to Maria.

Very fun!

I wish so much that it had a better ending, I agree with the others that there was no character development which was very anticlimactic, Cariel makes absolutely no sense and this bondwoman role is so horrible, there’s nothing positive I can say about that woman. I wish we got to know the characters more because this way when they say they love each other it means very little… it was an interesting and creative concept though, and the beginning was quite good, keep it up!