All Comments on 'Celia'

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Motherlessone77Motherlessone77over 1 year ago

This is a sad but beautiful story that brought me to tears. I won't be saving it to favs since I don't think I could handle re-reading it. How ever it is still a wonderful story and message.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Touching. Joyful. Sad. Respect.

mfbridgesmfbridgesover 1 year ago

With head bowed, I wish I had a love like that to be buried by. I've had two wives and I hadn't been able to get that close to either. Sadly, I'll likely be buried alone.

buzman0112buzman0112over 1 year ago

WOW!!!

This is such a great story!!! I have read hundreds of stories on this site this is one of the best ones that I have ever read and the ending made me cry but that did not take away from this awesome tale!!!

davevsr1davevsr1over 1 year ago

Out - Fucking - Standing !!!!! Only 5 stories to you credit ang you write a story this deep. Congratulations.

I will go back and read the other stories you have written. I will follow for new ones. Keep on writing !!!!!

b256485b256485over 1 year ago

just had to make the ending a shit one lol.

cleveland1rockscleveland1rocksover 1 year ago

I honestly wish I hadn’t read this, no matter how GREAT it is!

vanyevanyeover 1 year ago

Horribly stilted dialogue.

DarkkBrothaOneDarkkBrothaOneover 1 year ago

Perfection. 'Nuff said.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

I wasn't ready for the feels :(

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Should have warned me I would be a crying mess by the end of it 10/10

LoonytuneLoonytune3 months ago

I loved the story but hated that you killed of Celia when they had finely found happiness

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