All Comments on 'Cellar Survival'

Interesting departure from the normal bro/sis incest I read on here. Looking forward to another chapter to see where this goes. Good start.

Interesting spin on such a story. Thanks for writing it.

Don't stop now!

Fantastic imagery. I can hardly wait to see how it progresses.

Tc

Lol so she used her dust and dirt covered feet???

Please continue!!

Sooooo an army of some kind just decides to March thru this town for.........reasons?

After a week the thought of some unwashed feet of another person near me at all and I'm puking all over them.

So much potential

To be honest, I really don't know what to think. Your narration was not bad. It was fairly easy to follow, for the most part. As for the story, I have to think about it longer.