All Comments on 'Cellmates'

Surprisingly little time is spent on describing the vaginal sex, arguably the best part.

One hundred percent not believing a rapist would put his dick in her mouth.

Not really believing the rape victim orgasming in this situation. It takes time and effort to get a women to orgasm, and both didn't happen here.

The next day she tells the guard they raped her... SHE HAD DRIED CUM ON HER AS EVIDENCE! The two black men are arrested for rape. She sues the department for money for putting her in that risky situation. She then moves on with her life.

Seems like this is a rapists fantasy. What he does is acceptable since she enjoyed it, which is a poor message, and not believable without more explanation. IMO just be more honest about the situation, they rape her, degrade her, and she doesn't enjoy it, learn that they had nothing to lose and wanted one last fuck before going to prison.

It's quite possible and happens with many rapes that a woman has an orgasm. That does NOT mean she was wanting to nor that she consented. A woman's body will lubricate (get wet), orgasm, begin to move, etc out of reflex and self preservation, and on it's own when in a situation like rape many times. It's a natural reaction that one cannot prevent nor stop. A woman's body will react and respond even in the most harshest of treatments, need will override want, the body will give in.

On another note this is in the non consent area... of course it's a non consent fantasy. Rape is a non consent act. One that MANY people both Male and Female fantasize about. A common scenario that some even act out in various ways and forms. Quit being so judgmental, if non consent (RAPE) isn't your thing then read elsewhere... I'm sure they could use more in the Disney section of the children's library.

I am just giving an honest critique. This story is not believable and is reliant on stereotypes.

Anon, it sounds like you are the one that wants it Disney by making it magical and unrealistic. Both black men have stereotypical large black cocks which makes every women orgasm the moment it enters the women... /yawn

I never said women can't orgasm from rape, because they do. If you read my post it says "It takes time and effort to get a women to orgasm, and both didn't happen here." If the story is about how the women resists but secretly enjoys her rape, then you need to explain that in detail. In this story she cums very shortly after penetration with very little foreplay... Apparently they have Disney magical penises! I guess Disney cum also disappears shortly after contact, that would explain why the guard didn't see a cum stained rape victim when he returned.

I love non-consent but it has to be immersive. Rome was not built in a day and the same goes for the female orgasm. Other aspects of the story were also not believable. A shame because MattChancellor writes really well.

I don't care how hick a town it is

1) A woman would not be placed in a cell with two men

2) An officer would not leave prisoners alone out of hearing range in case of fire or medical emergency

3) she would still get the opportunity to call someone

It is more likely that an officer brings her home in protective custody and rapes her than the scenario you wrote. Even more likely is that the report of a car theft was for just that reason. Also she legally needs to be arraigned within 48 hours.

More please