All Comments on 'Celtic Mist Ch. 07'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Looking forward to when aoife and declan somehow come together again. Got me refreshing your page for updates

Crusader235Crusader235about 3 years ago
Wonder

It's a wonder he's still alive, and I wonder where he's going next. Five stars.

Comentarista82Comentarista82almost 2 years ago

While the story appears to advance, it feels like it's wandering: he fantasizes about Aoife--and it's charming how deeply it affects him--but there's no advancement of the story except for his wanderings due to work misunderstandings or avoiding unjust conscription. 3

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