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Jack turned a little red at the thought if his inadequateness compared to her. He was just this little guy, a new demon...or incubus...or both, however you looked at it. She was a golden goddess of lust and beauty. How could he ever live up to her expectations? She deserved someone who could at least match her size, if not her stamina. Someone like Tirol would be better for her, not him.
"Hey, stop thinking like that Jack," Anathane scolded, slapping his ass sharply.
"What?" Jack whined back, wincing as she slapped him again.
"Don't think I didn't put a little bit of me back in you already. One of me doesn't have a tongue anymore for a reason. So don't go thinking I'm too good for you. You're good enough for me; for all of us Jack. Even though Tirol is a giant, his sex drive is only as powerful as an angel's." She let her gaze fall on the angel, and by chance, the giant looked over and raised his hand in greeting. "You Jack, could outlast him at any moment in your life now. You are his sexual superior, and we are going to make you prove that soon."
"Does that mean what I think it means?" Jack asked, completely aware of what proving his sexual prowess meant.
"It means all four of what you think," the demon replied, leaning down to kiss his forehead. "Now let's go bring our white knight's maidens back home. Tirol can handle things here. And I think Kan is out of action already, if you know what I mean." She giggled and Jack saw what she meant by it.
Kan and Anthony were lost in their own world against one wall, locked in a timeless embrace of passion, attempting to find a little bit of privacy and avoid the eyes of their friends. Jack looked around to see if things really were clear here. Dalaria's men had surrendered and the battle had wound down here.
They pushed on without Tirol, Kan, and Anthony for obvious reasons and continued the search for the lowest dungeons where Anthony had said the three hearts were held before he and Kan had lost themselves to each other.
It was all winding down now. Everyone was back together as they should be. Anathane had returned and looked and felt more fearsome and beautiful than ever. All that was left was to recover Elassa, Niaf, and Fain and everything would be over.
Jack didn't care what happened to Dalaria now, as long as she couldn't do any more harm to Jack or any of his friends.
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A/N: Sorry there wasn't any real sex action in this chapter. It kinda sucked anyway; sorry about that. And I realized that anything I try to make epically important always falls short of how I see it in my head. Meh, whatever. I hope you enjoyed it.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 5 years agoDidn't mind the lack of sex, it made since for this part of the story. BTW love all of this series a lot, even if I don't always comment. Too eagre to keep reading to stop :D
TheHornyPhoenixalmost 7 years agoI know what you mean, that last part at the end. That's how I feel when I make a role play with my girlfriend that I had already created a story for in my head. It's never the same, but it couldn't be better.
Anonymousabout 7 years agoI was going to wait til the end of this whole saga before leaving any comment, however after reading your little apology at the end of this chapter, I had to respond. Do not sell yourself short. You have an amazing epic of a story here that I've had a difficult time tearing myself away from over the past few days. From what I've read, every chapter is equally important to each other. Though I get a thrill from the sex scenes (which is why I come to Literotica, a couple times literally lol), I love to see the conflict of you trying to paint those scenes so vividly through your words. I love supernatural/horror erotica, and you, my friend, most definitely have a talent for it.
lonewolfalphaover 8 years agowhy do i see jack a a kind of god amoung the demons that when he reaches his full poteantal that not evan Anathane will be able to stand up to him that may not happen but just my interpetation of how it is going so far
Anonymousover 10 years ago... did NOT suck. You had a lot of story to kick into the wrap-up phase. Doesn't matter if there was no sex in the chapter. I'm a firm believer that you don't have to have sex in every chapter to have an erotic story. For a story with a plot as well-thought out like this, it's inevitable that some chapters just won't have sex... you gotta advance the story, bro.
Apology appreciated, but totally unnecessary.
Anonymousover 13 years agoI LUUUUUUUUUUUUVVED IT .U R TOO GOOD!DONT CRITICIZE YOURSELF THIS CHAPTER WAS AS GOOD AS OTHERS.HOWEVER PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE POST THE NEXT CHAPTER ASAP MORE LIKE TODAY OR TUMMOROW
sandman0312over 13 years agoI just checked back today through some of the authors I have favorited and was happy to see that you have posted several new chapters since last time I looked. I have been following this story for the better portion of a year and have enjoyed the interactions of your characters as their relationships have deepened. The unknown factor in Jack's abilities is very intriguing. The cast of characters and world that you have created is both strange and fascinating in the imagination it took to write. I think you are getting ready to work in a twist in the events with Dalaria's frantic scheme for survival, possibly involving a previous character? I will be very interested to see if my hunch is correct from the hint you left about Jack's past. I know these are demons in hell and this is far from the conventional love story, but I really hope that you have a happy ending in the works for this adventure. There have been several instances that I felt you did succeed in the epic proportions you were seeking to convey. I will be looking forward to the next installment.
manyeydhydrafanover 13 years agoyou need to get the stories out faster this other athor i read has a 5 page story out every week
Anonymousover 13 years agoOh come on! I am begging you here! What is so special about jack? what makes him so exceptional in all walks of life? the lack of knowledge is killing me!
