All Comments on 'Central Bank, Paris'

You're really quite good at this!!!! So hot and hilarious at the same time.

Amazing story! Great pacing and very hot.

so good when his wife stops by for a feel

Is it actually like that in France?? 🤣

A finely crafted story, with a mature, well-controlled style, good details, and brisk pacing. I couldn't say how authoritative its depiction of Paris is: the details of the city are skimpy (and I don't know Paris, anyway). More to the point: the story is VERY erotic, and just plausible enough to be even more erotic. Very nice work indeed! I can't help wishing for a Chapter 2, in which we get to know Vivian a little better and follow the heroine/narrator's further development. Five stars.

Wow - I guess I’ve missed a lot in life! Great story - great descriptions of a complicated but erotic sex scene - not to mention the view of the Eiffel Tower! Boy is America prudish in comparison!

Maybe one of the best stories I've read on Lit. I look forward to reading more of your stories.