All Comments on 'Ceremony of Acquiescence - Group'

by SimonSeeward

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SomethingInTheWaySheMovesSomethingInTheWaySheMovesover 10 years ago
Diminishing returns

When you can water down a story with "Group Versions" and "Incest Version", etc, how good could it possibly be to begin with? Big Thumb Down.

SimonSeewardSimonSeewardover 10 years agoAuthor
It's not watered down

Thanks for your comment!

In the first version, the taboo was incest. In the second, incest was replaced with a taboo in which women could not make love with "free" men. From our perspective the second taboo is a bit unusual, but from the perspective of the characters within the story, the taboo is just as strong.

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