All Comments on 'Cerunos'

Thx

So a fire pit next to a cliff with a cave in it that’s in the absolute middle of nowhere happens to have a street address that google maps can navigate to. Fuck off just fuck right off. Then the bitch parks and wanders off alone and sits alone by a fire for ages with oh well the John will find me sooner or later. By the hour dick heads. Oh the 7 foot dude shows up and scares her and she runs for the... guess.. no guess again... THE DOOR. You know there is a cliff with a rock cave and a fire pit with a almost depleted fire and a seat and a car some way away. The only door is on the car that’s a ways away shit she’s running for the cave door.

This story is just so fucked up with errors and stupidity that I couldn’t continue.

Feel free to stop submitting stories to Literotica.

Btw, the spelling would be Cernunnos/ Herne/ Pan. I enjoyed your story a glimpse at the old ways.

To Jackspeed2u - yes it is very implausible but at the same time it’s clearly a fantasy. A walled up cave with a doorway in it has the nearest lockable door damn right it’s the best option. Just a minor query but is she a “bitch” because she’s a part time prostitute or is it because she’s a woman? Maybe it’s the cave as a residential address you’re having a problem with? I once met a guy who lived in a cave, the front of his house looked like a normal cottage but when you went inside you realised that it was part of a cave. LOTS of people around the world still live in caves, like Opal Miners in Australia. The film scene in Star Wars with Luke his Aunt and Uncle was filmed in what is now a hotel. The ONLY odd part here was the length of time that she waited for her customer. The rest is down to A God, survival instincts and of course MAGIC. 🙄

Tess (UK)

This piece was a really good story! I loved the writing and descriptions. I love how clearly you focused on the wildness that Cami took on. At some point I think everyone feels left of center to the human world and you articulate that really well. I loved the ending too. I wish I had read this first before the farm hand; only because the female names are the same and it threw me for the beginning of the story. Now my mind is insisting that the farmhand story came later on and it’s a continuing work about Cami’s misadventures.

Huh - I just took door as meaning entrance.

Jackspeed2U feel free to stop submitting comments lol