All Comments on 'Ch. 01 - Some Days One Wonders'

Great story, looking forward to next chapter.

Loved the beginning. Hopefully the next chapter will be published soon. Five stars and a favorite point!

Wow,,,I loved this story and can`t wait til another chapter is written...........

Excellent

Very good story flow and conversation. Your spellings and uses are atrocious: lead instead of led, exercise, within these walls (no apostraphe), that I been with should be that I've been with. Plus a host of typos. GET AN EDITOR! and continue writing.

Not sure if English is your first language. Some words used that sound like the correct one, but you chose the wrong spelling.

Love the story but you need an editor to catch the numerous spelling errors.

Great start please write more.

Notable insights by a very loving sister. Truly a level of love rarely seen.

Thank you for such beautiful writing.

Loved it!

Damn cumming hard!

Great first chapter.

I can see more chapters with mother and son, daughter and father and mother and daughter.

Keep up the good work.

Awesome story loved every part of it!!! Can't wait on the next chapter for mother to make love to her son and then maybe a threesome with her daughter!! Gave it 5 stars

Using chapter numbers in a title is good. Using them as the first characters of the title is not. If you write another story and use the same naming scheme, you'd have more than one that start Ch 01, Ch 02, and so on.

Enjoyed this one. On to chapter 2.

Love the detailed description of brother/sis sex. Daughter sounds like one all parents should experience. Don’t t tease. 4* even with the word reviling, which n your sentences would be revealing. You were consistent in your usage. Still an all, hot

please get an editor. you wear clothes, ware is an object; quiet not quit or quite and many more. 3 stars for first effort.

Please learn to spell. Your errors break ones flow of thought.

Good story, but you need a proof reader. Spellcheck is worthless. Read your own story slowly before you post. Otherwise, bring on the next chapter!

Great start! Ignore the anonymous grammar police. I wish you would have continued. I'm ready for some hard mom and son fucking.

If this story is to continue you need to get an editor/proof reader. Daughter also needs to jump dad's bones as cover for mom doing son . . . .