All Comments on 'Ch 3: The Flame Within'

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vodiodo69vodiodo69about 1 year ago

OMG! What can I say? I have been wet since the first part! So well written too. I felt I was in the story. Of course I was r. And it was tender and romantic. I enjoyed it immensely. Just my first read. I loved the relationship between Chloe and r . Seems more plausible and accepting than before.

As far as the sex—-I’m still very horny after reading and my ass is twitching. Bravo! More?

unholyintentionsunholyintentionsabout 1 year ago

This series keeps getting better and better. I had never heard an account of anal training as detailed, transparent and realistic as the one on this piece. Amazing job. And what a delight it was to continue reading about r's relationship with Chloe. Their sweetness together fills my heart.

mandywoodsmandywoodsabout 1 year ago

I loved this story.

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

This is the best written story at this platform. Love everything about it. Waiting every day for the next chapter!

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I write fiction, some from experience, some from imagination. I also write music, and I write code, and I write with a fountain pen.