All Comments on 'Chad and Chelsea Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
So good!!

So good! I can't wait for what happens next!!!!!!!

Just4Kix2Just4Kix2over 16 years ago
Love it...

Love the tease and time in regards to the oral sex.....very well written.

Your Northwest fan.....Just4Kix/Just4kix2

sirhugssirhugsover 16 years ago
Love how you write

I'm not a big fan of bro/sis, but love the build up, the pacing, the use of dialogue, the details and explicit language.....I hope Mom or Dad or others get involved in later chapters.

walkingeaglewalkingeagleover 16 years ago
Super great! Hurry with more!

This is wonderful! Each chapter excites us and makes us want more! Thank you!

oldwayneoldwaynealmost 16 years ago
Good stuff!

I thoroughly enjoyed your sibling sex offering. I hope you will decide to do more with this tale. I like your writing style and think you may have a natural talent for writing this type of story. Please give us more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

More please!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
What happens next?

Don't tell me you have abandoned this hot story. You must have found a partner that keeps you so busy in bed that you don't have time to finish this well told passionate affair. What a pity.....

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