by showdolly
Love the tease and time in regards to the oral sex.....very well written.
Your Northwest fan.....Just4Kix/Just4kix2
I'm not a big fan of bro/sis, but love the build up, the pacing, the use of dialogue, the details and explicit language.....I hope Mom or Dad or others get involved in later chapters.
This is wonderful! Each chapter excites us and makes us want more! Thank you!
I thoroughly enjoyed your sibling sex offering. I hope you will decide to do more with this tale. I like your writing style and think you may have a natural talent for writing this type of story. Please give us more!
Don't tell me you have abandoned this hot story. You must have found a partner that keeps you so busy in bed that you don't have time to finish this well told passionate affair. What a pity.....