All Comments on 'Chalet Retreat'

Liked the story .so more please.

Lovely little story of the joys of sharing with no thought of compensation. Thank you.

Good hearted as your work generally is.

Thanks for writing for us Ogg!

Winning and pleasant story.

Great story, one of your nicest lately, Ogg. Well paced, very plausible, detailed. Thank you for writing and posting it.

-- WWC 3

Usually gentle loving story well done, I wish I could write them like you

Another feel good story from the master, and as usual, just a little different. The normal sprinkle of errors and typos - I know this is you, but the read would flow much better without them. As an experiment, I copied this one into Word then an it through Grammarly - nearly all were caught.

I suspect that Anon above ran it through Grammarly set to American English. I had used Grammarly and Word 365's editor set to British English and all errors were corrected.

Don't know if that was the author's intention, but this story - which could have been a nice read - reads like a cross between advertisement and a pamphlet for free unrestricted immigration and abolishing borders. Really disappointing from usually good author.