All Comments on 'Champagne and Taxicabs'

Gone for ten years, you should have done everyone a favor and stayed away another ten. This wasn't a story, it was nothing more than a poorly written narrative.

Thank you for your comment, anon, I'm sorry you didn't like the story.

Wow, that last anon was just rude. Darling, it's porn not War and freaking Peace. I loved the story and it's so fucking hot as well. I can tell the author put a lot of love and care into their story. The author might have gone for ten years but their comeback was worth the wait! X

Writing a story in the second person is extremely difficult to pull off.

The 'you' you keep referring to certainly isn't me. You immediately succeeded in alienating half of your potential readership. Well done! Probably doing them a favor, though.

Very clichéd writing 'style'. This is neither literate or erotic.

Loved it! Immediate, hot, and erotic.

I instantly loved this, despite the small minded feedback. I connected well within this, and see it as written where it fitted. Good job! :)

Mafen, I assume you're a male reader? This story is aimed at women readers, as a lot of erotica, especially on this site, it aimed at men. So it's something for us.

I thought I'd try something different, with a 2nd person POV. Maybe it didn't work *shrug* NBD. It's just a little something I wrote for fun and I thought I'd share, it's not to be taken too seriously. It's only porn, after all.