by AutumnWriter
The author covers intrigue in the office world like he knows what he's talking about. I love a story where I am made to feel the characters are real. Wonderful story!
Great intrigue. If the sex scenes are equal to the high stakes game it will be brilliant.
Looking forward to the balance of the story.
AutumnWriter,
to tell a tale. It's sexy, erotic, and full of suspence. As my old English Lit teacher used to say; it's delicious. You have a rare ability to tell a tale. You arouse, you encite, and you draw the reader into the story. Thank You. Ronnie W.
The story is getting complicated and Paul is over confident. His treatment of Bert, while 'correct', lacked foresight and this lack of foresight regarding Agnes might cost him dearly. Any contact between the angry Agnes and Grafton will, most likely, upset all Paul's plans. Yes, the shit is about to hit the fan! Can't wait for the next chapter. Pete.
Agnes and Audrey are complicating everyone's lives! It is the case of pure Chaos! Fine insightful structuring about an apparently clearcut case.
more choices and chances for none. TK U MLJ LV NV