All Comments on 'Change'

Thanks for reposting, it's another 5* and very enjoyable.

Great hook in your last line. What’s Rockie’s comeback to that! “Gee, anyone we know?” Love all your characters and the way you continue the story through the generations. Thank you for sharing your talents with us.

Quite a story, too bad its about poor people (not) Connections with the president , interpol and all the 3 letter agencies. Our MC always on top of everything. We need a few more fight scenes where our MC takes out the biggest baddest macho dudes. Oh, we also need more astonishingly beautiful women. Good story, 5 stars

5/5, as always! Thanks for this wonderful story.

Started out thinking it would be a 5--pretty good writing an an interesting plot. But then the plot became more and more preposterous--auras, secret societies, genocide, etc.. So, a 4. Minus 1 for the gratuitous right wing talking points and gun fetishism, minus 1 for appointing Kavanaugh as Chief Justice, and minus another 1 for thinking that it would be a good idea. So, a well-earned 1.

Great story, but 31 pages is too much for one read, so I had to bookmark it. Regardless, interesting view of the world.

Great story. I could only give it a 5. but would have given it a 12 to make up for the fascist, intolerant leftist who gave it a 1. Mussolini, the founder of fascism was not right wing as the radical leftists pretend, but was a Marxist Socialist. It would be nice to keep length shorter

To Anonymous 19 days ago -

Your feedback is welcomed and respected. It would be appreciated more if it was associated with the correct story.

You obviously feel passionate about the FICTIONAL elements in my story, "Searching", none of which are in the story here that you commented on and claimed to have rated with a "1".

I never delete reader comments, so yours will stay. I just wanted to explain that it was misplaced.

Having lived in San Antonio for ten years I loved the inclusion of local landmarks. The part where Rocky ducted into SATX was ingenious as it was the correct direction and timing. Next time I visit, we will check out what the Pearl brewery became. It was still operating when we left. Well done. Excuse me. I think there is more to read, On to Katie's situation! Of course, SOLID five starz!

I read His Daddy’s Car, and got to p.10 of this one before I had to stop. Too much of a Mary Sue. Actually a whole family of Mary Sue’s, male and female. You write better than most, but needs work on character development.