All Comments on 'Change of Life Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Needs Editing!

Too whiny, too slow in developing, too much extraneous detail about life and unsatifactory sex with Shirl.

don87654don87654over 19 years ago
Good, but could be better....

Get rid of your vasectomy, and this would be a hot story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Don't do it...

If he nails the friends wife, he will probably lose a friend

and a wife. He would miss his friend.

I would try the wife one more time. Sit her down, tell her

how unhappy you are and why. Ask her why she is staying away

from you (brush your teeth lately??) and try to save the marriage. If not, then just divorce her and move next door to

your buddy.

Anyone in the USA that thinks women are not available for sex every night of the week is NOT getting out of their house enough.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
boring

done eat those stakes put them in the ground.

cliffhanger20cliffhanger20over 11 years ago
NOT LAME ANY MORE.

But it is starting to get weird!!

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