All Comments on 'Change of Life Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Egads, play nice...

Yeah, somehow his program repeated itself, but most of his

work is pretty good, so try cutting him a little slack.

Maybe WE need to volunteer as editors for Literotica??? If

my IQ were higher than my shoe size, I might go for it, but

I figure if I were an editor/proof reader and made a mistake,

some of you would castrate me and make me live with my ex

wife!! OK, the US Constitution would not allow that, cruel

and unusual punishment stuff, but it would allow the castration I guess.

My question is, can we get a new chapter four and five combined?? Toss out the old Chapter four? Just a thought.

Good luck and thanks for your efforts......

ed1ed1over 19 years ago
Good Job!

I like the story however it would be nice to find out why the wife hates sex! Maybe you can find away to get her into sex again and they can have a foursome.

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