All Comments on 'Chapel Girl'

by Salteena

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wjthermanwjthermanover 17 years ago
Excellent

Really outstanding! I'm very impressed and love the story!

mernie99mernie99over 17 years ago
Wow ...

So well written! I loved Bronwyn's innocence and curiosity.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Nicely written, but....

... if this were a true story, an in-house husband during her doing her doctorate would likely be feasible only if "you" had considerably savings. While luckily, PhD students in sciences are usually paid, aside, as I hear, from Scandinavia, they're usually woefully underpaid.

A PhD biochemist

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
The best yet

After reading your story Cradle Snatchers, I enjoyed it so much that I started reading through your other work, and I am so glad that I did. I almost never read the Romance category, I'm more interested in others, so I never would have read this story otherwise. That would be such a shame because this may be my favorite erotic story ever. Your characters are so believable, so human. You have character development but you still keep it sexy the whole way through and the sex descriptions are so vivid, I feel like I'm living it out. Even when you write in first person, which I usually hate, it's great. Usually it is so cheezy but you do it very well.

Thank you! And please keep writing!

daisy

KOTKKOTKover 15 years ago
tender

So tender,sweet,innocent, cute story i loved it.It's the best i read so far.Thank you for sharing.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

Loved it .One of the best

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