All Comments on 'Chapter 1: Rock Bottom'

Good start hope you finish it

Nice basic premise so far. But, Mate, leaving her alone in your apartment, just after you and she broke up!!! Poor, poor, decision. She could do ANYTHING.

You will find that Marcus is not always the wisest man. But he grows.

Great start to a story.

A bit hasty to leave her in your apartment.

Now Natalie, let's see where this goes.