All Comments on 'Chapter 5b: Confrontation'

I cannot see where this is going at the moment; the story is interesting enough to follow it. No one seems trustworthy, no one seems to have a redemption path possible or any incentive to do so apart from not going to jail, and the main character is indecisive and trusting Helen. So not voting yet, I’ll see where it goes. The story is working as a puzzle so far. I am very impressed as a 1st story though.