All Comments on 'Chapter Five: The Freshman Tease'

I absolutely love this story line. It is the one I look forward to the most. I am glad you're getting back to the denial part of the story. You hinted early on that Emily's family was trying to shrink and minimize her clitty but then it never came back up. I'm hoping that is where you are going now. This is awesome writing

Sorry I’m older and usually doesn’t like gay and lesbian type stories, but I found this story enjoyable read. I just can’t figure out why Emily is caged when she clearly likes girl (cis)? And is she being feed hormone pills to give her breast, in the first place, wouldn’t that have rendered her cock, to be useless anyway??

Fuck. So glad I'm not in college today. What a train wreck of so-called humans denying science and existing in a den of depravity.

This is very well done. Quite enjoyable. most stories with trans girls on this sight are very fetishistic, but this one is nice. Even with the situation, there is a sense of humanity so many of those stories miss. I am a trans woman, and honestly enough, even with the setting being what it is, it is making me wish i had come out before collage.

This is an interesting story, will be exciting to see how things progress.

What an Amazing story!!!!! Love the character development and the intricacies of the story. Excellent job!!!!!

This is my favourite chapter of the stuff you've done that I've read. It was sweet, and you could feel the genuine chemistry and companionship between these two. Both of them were characterised really well, too, the writing was impressive.

I liked the dynamic between cis-girl and trans-girl too, so few stories explore that in a way that isn't weirdly fetishised. I'd love to see them go on a date! Though I think seeing them hang out as casual sex friends would also be fun. Either way, I want more. xD

Also, your drawings are absolutely fab. Thanks for writing this! :)

Please add more.

Chapter 5 was wonderful. It reminds me of the way "Sunstone" starts somewhat superficially, then goes full with character & emotion.

i hope you write more some day. You are very talented.

The full book with 21 chapters is available since 2021 on Amazon and Gumroad from the author's profile page.

Read each episode, with my wife. While the stories weren't too bad, they are ALL in the wrong category. One drawing in each story doesn't qualify for illustrated stories. Belongs in transgender, to get higher scores.