All Comments on 'Chapter I: Commission'

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David_BrockDavid_Brock8 months ago

Looking forward to the rest of the story!

ArtsymArtsym8 months ago

Great start! I enjoyed guessing at the woman's motivation and background.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Great story. Looking forward to next chapter. Hope it contains some surprises.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

As am I!

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

interessant, fesselnd

Richard1940Richard19407 months ago

Different, don't know where this story is going

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Shawn Williams is an aspirant author and YouTuber. He started writing on a role-playing website where people pretended to be vampires and all of his skill comes from that. He deeply regrets this, but hopes people enjoy his book(s) anyway.

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