All Comments on 'Charlie'

Got crosseyed editing this story and thought I'd caught all the errors. Guess not, so please excuse any you find. Thanks.

DSJ

I think it was quite an interesting read.

Honestly I really liked it esspecailly the ending, could have done without the rape though but maybe im too much of a romantic...lol. :)

Nice story love to read more are you going tomwrite a follow up?

Did Charlie need to be rsped?

Charlie is sweet, cute and endearingly real. As our his feelings for Mike. I also believe Mikes love for Charlie is real. That being said Mikes rape, and beating of Charlie was wrong, and there were no consequences for his actions. Also the writer should deal with his issues with women, they come through and taint this story. Enjoyed the love story, hated the misogyny.