All Comments on 'Charlie and Mindy Bk. 02 Ch. 06'

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arrowglassarrowglassalmost 8 years ago
Great story....but a cliffhanger...hurry please!

love it and hate it when a good yarn ends with said cliffhanger...well done!

honybipolahonybipolaalmost 8 years ago
a brother is a hero

OMG...a brothers love know no bounds indeed...hoping that Mindy's hero did not get hurt so bad...can't get enough of the action in one chapter yet looking forward for more...great chapter as always

honybipolahonybipolaalmost 8 years ago
my bad

Sorry...huge mistake with the vote...I clicked with lightning speed...in a flash...not too happy with the three stars above so I had to post another comment...each chapter deserves nothing but the total five and more...

xsiveonexsiveonealmost 8 years ago
D***, pins and needles until .....

Great story, but hate the stop short ending until next time! A masters touch. Hurry please; I may be holding my breath.

Captain_FapulusCaptain_Fapulusalmost 8 years ago
Damn I have cliffhangers

Everything was going so smoothly it was bound to happen upon some drama sooner or later. Yet it did nothing to diminish the pleasure of this chapter, it only heightened my desire for the next chapter to see how it all played out. Hopefully Charlie makes it without much damage and his valiant effort saves Mindy.

5* as usual.

g912493g912493almost 8 years ago
Dick

I hate cliffhangers........... 5*

Comentarista82Comentarista82almost 8 years ago
5, although...

...I hope you won't make this "trip on the curb" thing with the Doberman a real bitch where Charlie and/or Mindy end up really torn up or one actually dies from it, as I see it happening with where you're going. Tension's fine, but please don't make this as bad as it could go.

Otherwise, I really liked the balance struck by Charlie recognizing he is scholarly and how even Mindy needs help--especially how they both balance each other out. It's a rare combination even in well-written stories.

msocaltimemsocaltimealmost 8 years ago
I'mean Dying here!!!!!

Like many others, I dislike cliffhangers. My heart is beating fast and I can't wait till the next chapter, please be soon. I'm dying here....

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
5 Wow

As there are two more books Charlie can't die but the drama I expected has happened. Not in a way I bet anyone would have predicted I think. Now we get to see again how they handle a crisis. I imagine this is more serious than a shin scrape.

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