by CarlusMagnus
love it and hate it when a good yarn ends with said cliffhanger...well done!
OMG...a brothers love know no bounds indeed...hoping that Mindy's hero did not get hurt so bad...can't get enough of the action in one chapter yet looking forward for more...great chapter as always
Sorry...huge mistake with the vote...I clicked with lightning speed...in a flash...not too happy with the three stars above so I had to post another comment...each chapter deserves nothing but the total five and more...
Great story, but hate the stop short ending until next time! A masters touch. Hurry please; I may be holding my breath.
Everything was going so smoothly it was bound to happen upon some drama sooner or later. Yet it did nothing to diminish the pleasure of this chapter, it only heightened my desire for the next chapter to see how it all played out. Hopefully Charlie makes it without much damage and his valiant effort saves Mindy.
5* as usual.
...I hope you won't make this "trip on the curb" thing with the Doberman a real bitch where Charlie and/or Mindy end up really torn up or one actually dies from it, as I see it happening with where you're going. Tension's fine, but please don't make this as bad as it could go.
Otherwise, I really liked the balance struck by Charlie recognizing he is scholarly and how even Mindy needs help--especially how they both balance each other out. It's a rare combination even in well-written stories.
Like many others, I dislike cliffhangers. My heart is beating fast and I can't wait till the next chapter, please be soon. I'm dying here....
As there are two more books Charlie can't die but the drama I expected has happened. Not in a way I bet anyone would have predicted I think. Now we get to see again how they handle a crisis. I imagine this is more serious than a shin scrape.