by CarlusMagnus
It's now far beyond a "Fuck" story. Thank you for your efforts and skill to keep us interested and looking forward to the continuation.
Well written, a delight to read. Please carry on with the saga.
For a chapter dealing with loss of parents and loved ones this one left me in a lot better mood than I was at the start of it, the love and support they lost they just as much found in Buck & Steph. Not only does it show how much they have grown as people but how much they became dependant on each other in times of their greatest needs, a predisposition for the life that awaits them now that they are (as far as the family goes) alone. Buck & Steph have literally became their anchors in life and proved to be the best of friends a person could hope to have in life, reminds me to socialise a bit more with those in my real life too. I absolutely loved how Mindy put Charlie into place when he was (again) overprotective of her and her feelings, it's always such a lovely sight to see them declare their love and express it in such plain terms yet always mean so much more than words can rally.
They had sex numerous times by now but this one will stand out on its own, probably because of the heavy emotional involvement but also because it reassured and maybe truly established what they convey with it and what it means to them. And it was hot too.
And now I once again find myself faced with a dilemma - how to justify just 5* for this masterpiece ;)
Of course I'm now anxiously waiting for the final book to start, just what does await our couple on their path.
Passion...love making....just being there for each other...well done!
Thank you for making the characters truly live for us. Loss is part of life and by showing how they handle and adapt to that loss, you make them "real". Please continue telling us about their lives.
You handled the deaths and their grieving very well. Their tender lovemaking that night was a special one. They enjoy the physical contact probably in a way they have never experienced. When her breasts tickle his chest hair (he's got that gorgeous coarse and dark hair), I'm sure both of them are excited. Keep them loving and growing in that love!
Excellent Reading I personally think that your first book was just slightly better . I am hoping that you that you can repost it if possible .
I could have done without the plane crash and steve butting in and picking up mindy like it was his job to do that. Would have been better if they flanked them on the couch with charlie and mindy in the middle to show their support. Only thing I havent liked about this story so far.
Loved the story so far but the scene where Steve picks up Mindy and he consoles her just wouldn't happen. I have dealt with a lot of people in this type of family loss situation and those directly affected will always seek consolation from the person they love the most. This scene spoiled this chapter for me.
I find the physical affection between Steph/Charlie and Mindy/Buck as off putting as it is unrealistic. Please God that it doesn't morph into outright sex. I'm afraid that would ruin it for me. Otherwise I've thoroughly enjoyed the first three books.