by Handley_Page
I thought it to be a stand alone story. The reader's imagination (saying they have one) would be enough for an addendum. Fantabulous! Cheers!
Doesn't need more, this had it all, from divorce, mental breakdown, rehab, sports injury & slowly blossoming love & sex. Nothing more needed, you've done an excellent job, keep up the good work. 5*****
Charlie cannot have had much of a sex life with his ex. Here's hoping it lasts with Lois.
This is a good romance story. The characters and the situation are nicely established. I don't think this needs more. The relationship moves quite slowly as both regain their confidence. Eventually both are ready for a full sexual relationship. I don't see the unresolved issues. The lesbian affair with the ex is over, Lois knows she is straight, and the revelation helps explains Jan's behaviour, Both have pasts, and both have told each other about them, so what is left to reconcile?
This is romance, growing awareness blessed with fresh sexy experiences. Lois targeted Charlie and, gradually, his hesitancy gave way to eager sharing. So many facets are expertly woven to provide a warm conclusion. Good stuff.