All Comments on 'Charlotte and the Landlord Pt. 01'

I love it, keep writing. I hope he's managed to both take her ass and impregnate her before they get away from him.

Perfect start .... take your time and polish your jewel, pun intended ^^

I love it! Looking forward to part 2

Nice start, keep up the good work.

Great story, can't wait for part 2!

Very good please continue the story 🙂

You had me at, "the comfort of anonymity". Nice work. On a technical note, there were more than a few missing commas, but otherwise nothing too distracting from your erotic tale. Looking forward to chapter #2

thank you, very good opening, can't wait to read more

Well written, enjoyable story! Great pacing!

Nice work, well-written. Good pacing and a slow burn with a good build up. Nice work also giving a fresh spin on an old trope (the landlord). Looking forward to part two!

I really hope author doesnt abandon this story like the other classics.

Need part 2

Bookmarked this and frequently check for part 2. Great writing and story.

Yes oh my God ! Please do more !

sadly, the author seems to have disappeared ?

Someone else carry it on?

We need a part 2 lol it’s great!