All Comments on 'Chase'

by WritingForToffee

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ZandriteZandritealmost 3 years ago

I was going to say "it's a marathon of sexiness"... and then I realized you distracted me enough to make me pun... but you earned it. It IS a marathon of sexiness. A very hot journey.

WritingForToffeeWritingForToffeealmost 3 years agoAuthor

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Wow. Simply amazing. I think I held my breath during the last two pages. You know how to capture an erotic moment without making it cliche or boring. Absolutely love it.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

That's beautifully written and gorgeously erotic. Bravo.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

OMG. Sooo wet reading this. So sexy at the end with the rain I almost slid off my chair. You gave me a new fantasy, cant wait for more! x o x :p

RoseNostagia88RoseNostagia88over 2 years ago

I felt so much energy reading this! I wish the ratings would have hearts instead of stars. I would give you five hearts!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Wow, I"m so happy that you wrote a sequel. This is incredibly hot.

RangeExpanderRangeExpanderover 2 years ago

This is so beautifully over the top, so hot, so much fun, thank you for the courage and range and depth of your imagination!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Hottest story on Literotica!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

please write more ...

AlmostavirginAlmostavirgin3 months ago

Just amazing! Thank you x

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