by WritingForToffee
I was going to say "it's a marathon of sexiness"... and then I realized you distracted me enough to make me pun... but you earned it. It IS a marathon of sexiness. A very hot journey.
Wow. Simply amazing. I think I held my breath during the last two pages. You know how to capture an erotic moment without making it cliche or boring. Absolutely love it.
OMG. Sooo wet reading this. So sexy at the end with the rain I almost slid off my chair. You gave me a new fantasy, cant wait for more! x o x :p
I felt so much energy reading this! I wish the ratings would have hearts instead of stars. I would give you five hearts!
This is so beautifully over the top, so hot, so much fun, thank you for the courage and range and depth of your imagination!