by jomar
This was a good start. I look forward to folowing the adventure. Keep up the good work.
One story with Chase is certainly not enough. Can't wait to read the next one. Great job with the characters and descriptions. Loved it!
my fave lines:
"Ruane loved her Beaver as much as Chase did, maybe more, and kept her in pristine condition."
and also:
' "But hey, don't you go thinking I haven't been in and out of that Beaver several times a day, though," Chase said with a wink.
"Still giving the Beaver a workout, eh?" '
lol, great word choices here. just had to tell you that.
I love Beavers. They look so tight but it is amazing what you can get into them!