by shirleyann
A new series that has well-written dialogue, well-written characters, well-proofed spelling/grammar, and that's longer than just a page!
A great storyline and hot action, got me hooked, can't wait for Part 2 :) x
i would have loved for you to expand on that long adventurous shower to make this chaper a 35/10. it was already at 30. you gave me all i could want in 1 chapter. characters, background well filled and the sex had me hooked... i think i just fell in love.
keep me posted on the update for the next chapter
Fantastic story and so well written! I love shifter stories and this is a great one. The plot is superb and the characters are well developed. One of the very best things about it though is the description of the place shifters have in the world created by the author and the limitations they face as a result. That makes the difference between a good story and a great story. And this is most definitely a great story.