by Neelam_Florence
Sorry...How could a stupid young man like him be having good grades in the University? And I see this will be a very long story...They are still girlfriend/boyfriend...then will come the engagement and in a far far away future maybe marriage...For me it ended here...1*
Chapter two was quite funny. This is now cruel and vindictive.
What a total slut whore pig. She would be dumped immediately. I never would have stayed as soon as I found out about her fucking these guys on our breaks. There are plenty of people out there so no one should stay with some cheating pig and that goes for guys and girls. He is really dumb , her and her friend fucking with his head. I also wouldn't deal with my girl wife having guy friends and would expect her to put up with me having girlfriends. He should tell her straight out as he fucks her ass that after he cums he packing his bag and leaving her . She can suck all the cock she wantsthan
He's a fucking retard and if she's banging other guys then a lot of guys get what he has.
You should have her come home with a queen of spades tattoo on both tits where they are visible and other slut tattoos. Thanks for the story. Can't what till chapter 4
Nice job! Like the pace and story telling. Nice characters too, not too shabby at all on their development. Keep it up and you will get even better. Don't mind the A'hole commenters to this site, don't let em get to you.
I laugh incessantly while reading stories by authors who obviously loved the idea of some other guy between their wives legs.
Then cum the commenters who feel the same way.
I have known guys like these and admittedly sent their wives home with my seed oozing into their panties. One guy could not wait to pick her panties up off the floor and press them to his face.
For the BTBers out there-HEY I AM WITH YOU
BUT WHY GET UPSET AT THESE AUTHORS WHO WANT THEIR WIVES TO CHEAT.
INSTEAD CONTACT THEM THROUGH PROFILE PAGE
YOU MIGHT JUST GET SET UP WITH THE WIFE
INSIST ON A SKYPE SESSION THOUGH-MIGHT BE A REASON THEY DO NOT CARE THE WIFE IS STEPPING OUT
The slow build up and changes in direction are really great. Can't wait to read more
Chapter 1 and 2 were really good (5*) with the slow interogation, sexy pace but this one seemed different. The girl isn't the shy, loving girlfriend anymore, she sounds like a vindictive, cruel, manipulative type of girlfriend and it kind of leaves a sad feeling in the end. 2*
Good cuckold shit 5*****. Keep going neelam.
This was probably good for the cuckold audience but I would have preferred the boyfriend to have had more backbone and girlfriend a little less cruel.
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Queen of spades is a good idea. I hope your making another chapter this is a good story.
That she is having sex with Terrance...and others...and all he is getting is handjob while she spoonfeeds him into cuckoldry. By Chapter 4 he will be a knowing, willing, subjective, whiny cuckold. Everyone who knows them will know he is a puppy dog cuckold, ready for either a leash or chastity cage, if not on his way to physical castration. Hmmm...it didn't take him long to go from a man to a eunuch cuckold.
Jeeeze, this is one of the best "slow burn" cheating girlfriend stories on the entirety of Literotica. PLEASE don't let the naysayers who put down this genre out of ignorance keep you from writing more chapters to this story. It's fantastic!
If you enjoy the pangs of being a cuckold, you understand. I love the story!
Please write some more, I love the teasing nature of this story.
First off - THEY AREN'T MARRIED! This junk doesn't belong in the LW section and since they aren't he can't be a cuckold. At least TRY to understand what you're writing about. In this messy chapter I doubt he's getting off at all since he's so drunk. Guys don't even get an erection when they're that drunk. So the bitch getting him off at the end was complete bullshit. And unless she's set him up with her friend how does she know they kissed? This whole mess is a setup. He needs to simply pack his stuff and live elsewhere - anywhere - away from this bat-shit-crazy woman. This was really stupid.
1 star
Awful story not hot at all. Girlfriend is a skank assed whore and the boyfriend is a dickless moron! No redeeming quality in this dumster fire!!!
Really, really, really lame. I don’t care what Summer did or didn’t do. And I don’t know why anyone would. L-A-M-E.
This dude is one of the worse male characters ever. Gtow so,e backbone you weak pussy. And summer is a typical bloody whore.
I liked the dirty talk in these stories, the only thing I wasn't a fan of was just how over the edge this guy was in his inscurusities, but at the same time it honestly made the sorry talk better so maybe it wasn't really such a bad thing
Love this story, hope you write a few more chapters. Summer could make me her cuck anytime. She mad my cock hard and dripping lots of precum.
That he is a wimp, a fool, and a cuck. He has no balls and no backbone. He lets her screw almost anyone and he just accepts it. She just a selfish whore and knows she can do anything she wants so long as she lets her so-called boyfriend get sloppy seconds. NO STARS for this POS.
Cuck shit, always scores 1/5 from me
I see u stopped your writing career, good. Go back to your day job and stay there.
Well hell, he bugs the shit out of her, popping his wad when she admits to fucking around. As long as she doesn't mind why should we? If he's lucky she will give him a ringside seat so he can watch.
May they live happily ever after!
Can't get her past out of my mind. Is she cheating?
If she were you'd be a happy little bisexual pretending NOT to be while eating other guys cum out of her.
Pretty much says it all about you closet queens.
Talk about being pussy whipped. Enjoyed the story until he kept going to her work and then confronting her. What he(you) should have done is have him follow her after she left work or to go studying. Even drive a friends car and sit in the parking lot to see what she did next.
Only gave this 3 stars. I enjoyed it but we had all the build up and no pay off. Fucking stupid ending.
Naprawdę idiotyzm pełny, az szkoda komentować takowe smieci. Ktos ma problem sam ze sobą.