All Comments on 'Chasity Woodworth Pt. 01'

Appealing plot idea and sensuous scenes in the BDSM spirit and atmosphere. If the editing was better, it would be excellent, so it is still a good and promising start. Hope there is more to come.

Best wishes, Simon

I enjoyed your story but it badly needs tidying up -- you even have a typo in the title, which never looks good.

Some good ideas and not badly written; if it had been a little better it might have been worth five stars but as it stands only worth three.

Rewrite it, with some help if necessary, and re-submit; tthen you'll have a winning story.

it's HOT