All Comments on 'Chastity Pt. 01'

by thepeopleschamp

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Good start

Can't wait to see where it goes, hope the next part is coming soon!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Couple of facts

He can achieve an orgasm while in the toy cage. He can remove the toy cage at any time without the key - it's a toy. Any woman that treats you as an object to be used and abused isn't worth your time. He needs to remember he has both pride and self respect and throw the cunt out. Stupid story. Not worth the time spent to read it albeit it's only fictional drivel.

1 star.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
loved it!

Especially the "drivel" references at the start lol! I would've given it a 5 still, but that was awesome!

mel_pomenemel_pomeneabout 8 years ago
Very nice too!

You really must continue with this theme. I don't like the term 'sissy clitty' but I can live with it for a story as well-told as this. Five stars.

bat_08bat_08about 8 years ago
Can't Wait For More!

Phenomenal start! Love the elements of what can transpire through this story! Chastity, humiliation, tease and denial... this has elements of an amazing series!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Please, continue this!

Amazing, we really hope for more.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Great start!

Can't wait to see how she tortures and teases him. I really liked your other series, and I love chastity, so this one is right up my alley.

fmp0927fmp0927almost 8 years ago
A promising start

Looking forward to reading more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Drivel!

Great start, can't wait for new chapters! I love how you made the drivel reference in the beginning, I laughed out loud while reading it. Fuck that anonymous douchebag, and keep up the good work peopleschamp

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Beyond stupid

Bitch slap her, take the photos and delete them and then crush the phone. All done.Plus which, she puts that cage on him, he calls the cops and she goes to jail. The photos simply serve to convict her of blackmail in addition to the assault, battery and sexual assault charges. You do know that it's illegal to put someone in a cage - right??? This was beyond dumb. PS- Even if she puts the cage on him he removes it without the key in less than a minute. It's a toy you moron.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Pls continue

Amazing story! Would love to see more chapters

RegretsRegretsover 3 years ago
A coldness in the interaction, not a good sign

The inevitable camera shot. The threat to upload in an instant. This is a metallic and cold relationship. Chastity should not be practised without handcuffs, cuffed, she could have edged him delightfully and shown what a wonderful mistress she might be if he pleased her, and then she crosses to the fridge-the ice-the lockup and he sent home with her socks, which she wants him to keep inside his pillow

By the time the next day comes he will be fully aware that he must demand that she releases him. He may find then that her condition for release of the cage is that he accept that he be held down with straps and caned because he demanded release without asking her what SHE wanted. After the very severe caning and having forgotten the handcuffs he finds out next day that the cage will be released only after the handcuffs are locked. His future with her becomes clear and yet he finds himself in turmoil but very aroused and painfully excited. He ask her what he might do to please her. She takes his arm and they go for coffee.

bananafishiexbananafishiexover 2 years ago

I cannot believe 5 1/2 years later there is no Part 2 yet ... what a fantastic start.

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