All Comments on 'Chat Room Surprise'

I loved this story.... I hope more is to come.

Just a thought. Puncuation can be your friend. A few well placed periods and commas make a much better read.

great story .can't wait for the next chapter . i guess i'm selfish but i hope dad gets pissed and leaves when he see's his wife blowing her son that is if the 2 sibs work out a plan . sis did say she wanted bro first so she wont mis dad for long now that she has her brother . then brendan can have mom and sis all to himself after the divorces . yes don has to find out that his wife has been cheating

I actually enjoyed this:)

Really enjoyed it. Hope there's more.

Would like to see another chapter. Thanks

That was a great story. Wish he had fucked his sister earlier

Reading your story has got me wanting to give my sister some of my cock. And even though shes on birth control. It makes me want to squirt all my baby cream deep inside her and fill her pussy up for her.

holy crap that was very well written hope there's more ^_^

Hot! Really hot! Did I say hot?

But this didn't surprise me. Well written though.

I did the same thing to my lil sis.....but my sis was 5yo when i did it.

father/daughter turns me off, mother/son isn't quite so bad i prefer bro/sis or cousins

alot of nonrelated buildup that doesn't match the title. you spend over half the story talking about everything but the brother sister sex. if you are going to list a story as bro/sis then that should be the main if not only thing in the story. i also agree with one other commenter father daughter is a MAJOR TURN OFF.

Superb storyline though narration could have been more teasing

Anyway loved it

Great story. Brother and sister love each other and want to please each other.

Good idea about the computer.

Hope you add another chapter with Mom and Dad.

A well - penned story which I enjoyed very much. I guessed the twist just before the 'reveal' but that didn't lessen the impact of the climax. A really good hot story; thanks.

If only this could happen to me and my Sis

Well done. 5 stars

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Excellent composition, flawlessly literate—a real treat to read. I appreciate not having to look past mismatched tenses and other sixth-grade-level writing.