All Comments on 'Cheater's Gallery Ep. 02: Denise'

I loved it. Please keep this series going!

Good job. Shades of Twilight Zonen and Night Gallery.

Was just cut and paste from your previous offering 'Cheaters Gallery: Wendi'. So much so, that there was little point in reading it.

Ok a series. I get it now. I read chapter 3 first. Still not your usual stuff

Thanks for sharing.

He thought his wife was cheating but she will be upset if I check!

What a wimp.

Finds out she was screwing him when met and still doesn't have any balls.

Then when finally shoved down his throat, he doesn't have guts to tell the truth.

Cheaters and I will not attend funeral

Thanks for some stories where protagonist actually does this.

jtwheels

Love the Kansas tornado karma!!!

What a stupid wimp...he pises me off more than his slut wife

I do like this series, this is the second time reading the first three. The fourth was just published today. Thought I would read the first three first. I have read the comments from other readers, and I have to agree. Why make the husband seem such a stupid wimp? Married men are suspicious by nature especially when married to a beautiful woman. When sudden changes occur in a relationship, men take notice and they act. That's if they can think with the big head and not rely on the little head for most decisions. It wouldn't take a supernatural interference to open the mans eyes. Although with todays courts and ignorant judges these events would have to take place for justice to be served.

Still a good read, bringing it all together,, still *5*

5 like said before it the unseen that gets you everytime.

very well written. I really like your stoties with Dr A. Krrp up the good work.

Great read!!!!

This is a fantasy/sci-fi series; any "sex" is purely incidental and merely a device to ground drama. It is definitely NOT erotica by any stretch of the imagination. It has no place being here - kindly remove it!

I'm somewhat confused by the various definitions that are in play regarding Loving Wives.

For some it's BTB or hit the road. Others want nothing more than raw sex.

When I first saw this category I thought of any story dealing with wives: Sex, BTB, reconciliation, love stories, cuckoldry, humor, and so on. And I'm personally glad that this category does embody that variety.

Perhaps all the strict BTB and/or cheating wives and/or just sex readers should petition the site owners to expand into separate categories to meet your narrow needs.

Love the originality of thought and creative plots. To me this is the epitome of Loving Wives genre

This poor writing - wimp art critic let her carry for so long without acting - more of an arse critic

WHATS THE POINT IN THESE STORIES WHEN THE CHEATERS ARE NOT EXPOSED -THEY FUCKING DIE LOOKING GOOD

Ok story, but I hate when the payback is death to the cheaters. Wheres the closure? They need to experience longer regret. I know the story was to capture their death in the painting, but that wasn't satisfying. ughhh!

I enjoy the calm justice delivered to the cheaters and the after of the cheated spouses.

Not really into the supernatural part of the story. Further the ending way too short.

Wow! You just get better and better! Thank you for writing these stories...All of them!!

As a Cuck, I wish Adrestia could have done something for me. The strain most of the time makes me wish I still had my pistols so could eat an 230 grain .45ACP exit strategy. BTW The Story would your mind (npi) If you are still writing and think you use it. You'd have to think up a happy ending because I'm still living the Nightmare.

Saddletramp---Damn, I love your stories. I am a BTB type of person. Having lived it decades ago. Happily married now.

Well done.

The wrath of god on cheaters

Dr A is a wonderful character, I enjoy all the stories she has appeared in. What wonderful universes you have created. Keep up the good work!

Another good one, good things come to those who wait.

A very good read.

Happy endings with well-deserved endings (aka: getting even) makes for one helluva ride. Great job, Author!

Odd. Why would Denise even bother to try to patch things up? And a tornado? Rofl.

The problem with these stories is that the wife and asshole don't suffer, they just go poof, the husband's vengeance is much too impersonal.

More of the same. Too similar to part 1.

I love this series! Love the dead cheater stories and you do them well!

same story just different names.

Fun story. That said, would any man, sans those spinelesshence truly self deluding,

have put up with her behavior. Beyond a doubt her cheating would take a front and center demand for investigation.

Once confirmed, start counseling for him begin his emotional separation, get ready to move her out then serve her, and the Good Doctor at a social function-being sure to give both, please the Chief of Surgery AND the Hospital Board a copy of the PI report PLUS video.

His and her local status, to mention their jobs, would go to ZERO in one day.

THAT would be a lovely scenario; to watch her suffer. The Doctor would have cared less. He'd just move on.

Another great story. Onward to the next one.

Hi, your stories usually start well. And in the end she can't think of anything better

than your protagonists die. That's quite a poor performance and a sign

lack of imagination

The cheaters gets off way to easy, sure they die, but is the easy way out, but cheaters should be humiliated and publicly shamed, so that all their friends, family and peers knows what they have done, and what scum they are

Loved it! Thanks!

Corny as pluck, but still deliciously enjoyable!

R.S.

Damn you know how to draw a person in with your words, Thank You! You're always the best Saddle Tramp! Another 5 BIG ASS FUCKING HUGE FLAMING NOVA STARS!

Damn, Viper, what did you do, cut and paste that review from the last Saddletramp story you read? I would swear it’s a word for word quote.

Another very nice one, ‘Tramp, thanks for sharing.

Five stars.

Génial, j'adore

Very good story, the tornado from hell was a nice touch. Thanks for sharing.

Five stars.

I always like your stories 5*****

This was an interesting story! Five stars, for sure. Curious that Dr Branstead had fucked Denise while she was a co-ed in California. Then they hooked up together again after she married Joe. Again, it makes no sense why Denise married Joe. I realize in this case, Dr. Branstead had no intention of divorcing his trophy wife but still, what did Denise see in Joe? Well, again with the trickery of the portrait, Joe found out about Denise cheating on him and their plot to get her pregnant and make Joe raise that child as his own. Yet again, they died while en-route to see Joe so Denise could try to save her marriage. Great story. Very thought provoking.

‘Another cautionary tale from…. “The Twilight Zone:”. It sure seems like it anyway. In fact a lot of ST’s stories seem like they were born in that “Zone”. Great stuff though, I love it, hope to see more of it. Thanks, ST. Five Stars.

Another stupid man lets the bitch get away for a while before things happen. What a cunt. All these men are dumb fucks

PROBLEM WITH THE CHEATERS GALLERY IS THAT ALL THE CHEATERS GET OUT EASY WITHOUT ANY EMBARRASSMENT OR CONSEQUENCES BY JUST DYING. DEATH IS AN EASY OPTION FOR CHEATERS

A carbon copy of your Wendi story with cosmetic changes here and there. And death definitely seems the easy way out. Their infidelity is covered up, no humiliation, no suffering of consequences. No justice. Justice demanded that the cheaters really suffered for their deeds, along with the assholes they cheated with.

I've read this series, and the cheaters DON'T get away scott free as some of the bonehead set claim.

What else but suffering would you call "living" in your last terrifying moments of life forever?

Some people are just so f'n stupid.

And, saddletramp1956, would it be possible to revisit this series' theme with some new stories?

I, for one, would really appreciate it.

Thanks