All Comments on 'Cheaters Never Prosper'

It was expected. Mindy cheated once before, she'd cheated again. Kim's and Chris revenge was nice, too bad you did not add Mindy's sorrow for her ungrateful act.

Kim's and Chris experience about being cheated on, might make a good relationship for them.

Are just lucky.

Are just lucky.

Nothing terribly exciting. What does the title have to do with the story? Thanks for the offering.

Cheaters are like a cancer of goodwill in our society. Playing with another human's emotions is very risky business. Revenge can cover lots of territory as this author explores. The story was narrowly focused but was extremely well written. I felt there was little romance but there was great chemistry with Kimberly. Thanks for the effort.

I don't know why you put this is the Romance category.

It belongs in the cheating area. A quick fuck has nothing to do with romance regardless of what teenagers think.

Exciting and initially intriguing. After a certain point it becomes pure stroke, but the telephone call at the end is a fun idea.... I wonder what the security cameras got..

Anon, what exactly were you reading?

It was perfectly readable.

Don't write in the present tense, it's unreadable.

now factor in the un-tangibles and watch the $$$$$. TK U MLJ LV NV

Great sex I love short stories with action in them. Thanks for sharing.