All Comments on 'Cheating After The Threesome'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

I’m glad you specified she had a pair of C-cup breasts because my default assumption is that a woman has seven breasts. If you hadn’t said ‘pair’ it would have been very confusing wondering where the other five went.

Seriously - just say ‘nice C-cup breasts’. We don’t need a counting lesson for THAT!

I was too distracted by that...

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Again Douchebag!!

Now I know you're a teacher anon. (See this author's previous story for reference on this comment). What a douche. Relax asshole.

GcoachGGcoachGover 6 years ago
This was a good premise for a story.

However, it felt rushed. Take us on a journey, more details, slow down. This felt like a 30 seconds roller coaster ride that was over before we really got going. You described 2 sex scenes in less than a page. Love the idea, just slow it down

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