by Irish Moss
All you have to do is change the names, and this exactly describes Erika and me!
Ok, one more difference - it's all in my head, but it has happened in the shower 900 times. Even better seeing it in print!
Nothing like the wife taking the low road and becoming as much of a slut as her husband. Why are these two even married? What is their reason for staying together, author?
Nothing or nobody to like in this story.
who cheat are nothing but trash and should be kicked out in to the gutter where they belong
well-written. Interesting that the author chose to have the third-party cheater tell the story. The author did not tell us anything about Jim and I was left wondering why Irene stayed with him. Not enough LW stories from IM.
How does this affect the relationship between Sweetie Irene and her cheating hubby? The (first) adventurous phase just ended with the story abruptly ending! This is MUCH more like Erotic Coupling! There is precious little tension/drama.
3*. competent depiction of a sexual episode, period.
He was cheating, so she started cheating, and then they were all cheating. What ever happened to good old fashioned divorce?
If these 2 people are such a good match, why can't they show some integrity and be upfront about their actions. I don't see anything about Jim and Irene being married
So why doesn't Irene just call it quits and hook up with dickhead? Why does the author insist on them showing the same lack of a moral compass as Jim. Makes them totally unlikable.
Stupid premise that because one does it it's okay for the other to do it. Or the friend to do it. Just a bunch of dogs running around loose. Not much of a writer to create this, and there wasn't really any point, didn't go anywhere, no ending. Not worth the trouble to write or read.