All Comments on 'Cheating Sister In-law Ch. 03'

by PretendWithMe87

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Mmmmm I can't wait for the next part.

Juice

kidjackass1kidjackass1about 6 years ago
Can't wait for this to contiue.

Great job PretedWithMe87. Love it.

LastAvatarLastAvatarabout 6 years ago
Too much cliff hanging

The story seems pretty good, and the build up is going at a pretty good pace.. but the fact that it is separated into parts that get released every few days is such a turn off... Quite literally

pastaman47pastaman47over 5 years ago
Agree with last avatar

By splitting the story like that, it seems to break the build up that you have been creating. If you like this style,fine, stick with it. It doesn't hurt to be your own person. I want to see more from you.

SAV12SAV12over 5 years ago
WHERE'S THE REST?

TRUE IT SHOULD HAVE BEEN A 1 CHAPTER STORY BUT, TO HAVE IT UNFINISHED RATES A 3 STAR ENDING.

michaellogan20michaellogan20over 3 years ago

When is the next chapter going to be written you left us hanging?

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